Cassie wrote:
Can anybody spot my mistake?
I'm surprised no one has mentioned it yet... Its subtle, but also glaringly obvious in a way..
I did find a typo, "theground" in the tribble section. Are off duty and formal costumes limited to certain slots still? I thought they could be worn in any slot, just with the dropdown. I also think that "formal" wear should be lumped in with the off duty stuff, but whatever.
You did leave out the engineering / ship corridors / etc. from the part about the bridge, which a completely new player might not look for if they think they just have a bridge. I guess the next thing about "ship interiors" might give them a hint though.
soonerjrj wrote:
Yeah...your question marks on "do you know that". Plus there is a few blaring mistakes in your sig.
Speaking of your sig... I don't know if it's just me, but your character's eyes look HUGE.